Oh, that's perfect! I just did a quick erase-and-typeset of the two of the dialogue-heavy pages, page nine and ten. (eta: oops, I realized I gave the pages the wrong number filenames--but I still put the right words on the right pages...!) They still need to be cleaned a bit and the text centering and shape is a little off in places, but I'd go back and fix them for the real thing--this is just so you can see the font and everything. Does it look okay in general?

I think captioning/annotating the sound effects (the ones not in text boxes/bubbles, anyway) would be easier, since I'm nowhere near good enough with text or graphics to do a decent redrawing. Any hiragana/katakana help would be nice; I've picked a few (like any manga reader) but sometimes the SFX are drawn so dramatically it makes them a little hard to recognize. *g*