writing meme

[salinea]

I don't expect much answers there, for obvious reasons, but heh :

meme, gacked from stoicstella

1.) What is your overall impression of my writing?
2.) Is there something you think I do well?
3.) What do you think I could improve on?
4.) Which of my fics did you like best, and why?
5.) What would you like to see me write more of? (ship/genre/whatever)

Comments

[laurus-nobilis.livejournal.com]

1) The first word that comes to mind is "dark", but that doesn't say a lot, does it? It's more about the themes than the style. I really, really like the way you write. You can be very poetic, but you also do humour well.

2) You know how to get the readers into the characters' head, if that makes any sense... Hmmm, I don't know how to explain it. But I notice it the most in your Marauder fics, how they all have clear different voices.

3) I honestly can't think of something to say here. :/

4) "Could have been me", mostly because of what I said in #2.

5) Clow, of course! ^_^ Seriously, though: I think you could write Clow's darker, twisted side really well and still make him look sympathetic. (And there aren't enough Twisted!Clow fics out there, not good ones at least...)

[stoicstella.livejournal.com]

I am terrible at these sorts of things... I hope you even have half a clue what I am talking about, heh.

1) Poignant. I feel like I have been kicked in the stomach with the intensity of it sometimes. I just feel like "yes, that is it. That's exactly it."

2) you shape characters so well. In those drabbles you did about hate, they just went right to the motivations of the characters and made perfect sense to me. Also you have a way with the cadence of your prose. When I read Fantasy, I was moved just by the way you structured your phrases.

3) Write more? ^_^ I'm sure there are probably grammatical slip-ups here and there, but frankly I hardly ever notice that sort of thing. I think your writing is so enjoyable, that I think more, more, more would be the best improvement.

4) probably Fantasy, just because of the reasons above... your Regulus/Sirius story was really great, and I love all your drabbles... but Fantasy, was breath taking (sorry I have not read your other fandom stuff... so I can't be too helpful there)

5)Snape/Lupin ^_^ and the Black family stuff is also very enjoyable.

[scribbulus-ink.livejournal.com]

Sorry for the OT comment, but I emailed you at etrangere @ livejournal.com (since there wasn't an email address listed on your profile page) a few days ago about doing recs this month for the snupin_prophet. Hopefully it reached you, but if not, if you could email me at snupin.prophet @ gmail.com, I'll resend the information.

[etrangere.livejournal.com]

I did recieve the mail, thank you !
I was working but I don't have much time during the week to do that, so well I was expecting to finish this today ^^